Tuesday 11 March 2014

The Hideous creature

The hideous Creature.   
I was running up and down the beach making sand castles. I was about to put my last shell on the sand castle. Man that was tiring I thought I would have a little swim before we go. I was about to put a foot into the sea when I saw the scariest smelliest thing I had ever seen. I snuck up slowly hiding behind a big rock to get a better look..


The hideous creature Sat on the top of a seaweed covered rock. It’s body was shaped like a seahorse and a mammal. The hideous creature had very big black eyes, and suddenly it winked at me. The creature had big fangs like a tiger and the rest just looks like horse teeth. It’s body looked much like leather. The thing Had a terrible looking fin which looked like one of the tiger fangs.  The hideous creature looked like a monster.    
 
I wonder if it swims properly with those tiny fins. It probably keeps it’s mouth open all the time. I am sure that hideous creature stays on the seaweed covered rock most days.                             
WARNING if you ever go to waimarama beach again  most likely you will see the hideous creature. If you see it then please stay away from it. It’s dangerous!

   

8 comments:

  1. well I think that is my best post on my blog

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  2. eeeewww!!!! that thing sounds soooo gross and you have described it very well tessa, good work girlfriend lol. from tessa's cool mum :P

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  3. great story tessa very funny and informative last time i swim at waimarama now lol

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  4. great job tessa i will be looking out for that sea monster

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  5. Great writing Tessa, I am pleased it is at Waimarama and that Bel and I didn't see it last week!

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  6. Wow Tessa. What an amazing description. I'm glad I swim in the beach in Napier not at Waimarama

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  7. That puts a pitcher in my head from my buddy charlotte room 9

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