In the holidays.
My teeth crunched into the chocolate flake and it melted in my mouth.
Mum bit the big juicy strawberry on top of a huge mountain of berry smoothie my brother licked a huge chunk of sherbet off his drippy ice cream. I sucked the milk chocolate chip off my dinky duck melting ice cream and we both had a big flake chocolate smoothie with one straw and one spoon. The spoon was a big help to get all the flake out.
Mum paid for everyone's sweet ice cream, and goodies. After that Mum Jamie and I were looking for a place to sit. Everyone had taken the best spots to sit so mum thought of a good plan then told us.
After that we had to buy sushi to have a seat at the sushi place. You have to buy sushi to sit there, then we watched the man make the sushi we had ordered the flavors were chicken and salmon So after all it was a yum lunch any way.
By Tessa
cool story Tessa well done and great job
ReplyDeleteWOW!!!!! what a captivating and exciting story, full of descriptive words and just about making me hungry for ice cream!!!! great writing piece Tessa, well done you!
ReplyDeleteThat was a GREAT piece of descriptive writing! It sounds exactly like what happened. While I was reading this I could remember the exact thing. Well Done Tessa!!!
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